CK Lynn

Cool. I really liked all three pieces of your art I've seen so far. Cartoonish-but not silly-cartoonish (if that makes any sense). :)

Cute! :) I really liked it.

Wow, cool. Dark and compelling.

Ooooh, creepy. Very nice, though. The imagery was very good. I'm not sure what your subject is. Oh, lies. *slaps self on forehead* I should read the titles! The only ...

I really liked this! You know she's a flutist because she strikes up to join the rest of her band(the band, perhaps?) with her shoulders powdery white and bare despite ...

I liked the closed eye better than the open one. Somehow it was more powerful. The "See All Evil" one was a bit blurry.

You can have a Mod, move or delete, this copy, if you want. That way its out of Poetry.

I actually really liked this. Short and sweet, but still filled with bittersweet emotions. Very nice. Please use apostrephes (is that speeled right?) though.

Very good. I liked the rythmic-repetitiveness. I do think "nth" would be better as "billionth" or "infininth" though. It's a bit awkward.

Um, I don't know if you missed the forum name or what, but this is the narrative POETRY (how do I do bold on this thing?!) but this is fiction. ...

They all sound cool. My mom will love this. She's been a bit worried about college funds ever since I didn't turn out to be the athletic type.

I'm an atheist parents think I believe in God) because I don't like the idea of some divine being regulating who I am.

I really liked it-all except for the last line. It just didn't sound the same as the rest.

This was very good. The subject was perhaps a bit cliche, but you presented it in a new way with refrehing vocabulary. The one phrase I didn't like was "I'll ...

When I went to YWS today a message popped up before I got to the homepage saying "YWS Sanctum-Here New Years"